Almost every chapter has some kind of pronoun error, you guys should do a more careful proofreading. i.e. in this chapter, when the woman with darker hair was talking about her own fiance you guys used pronouns that seemed like she was talking a 3rd person not present in the conversation. And when the MC woke from his nightmare and was thinking of his dead sworn brother, the pronoun she was used instead of he.
Almost every chapter has some kind of pronoun error, you guys should do a more careful proofreading. i.e. in this chapter, when the woman with darker hair was talking about her own fiance you guys used pronouns that seemed like she was talking a 3rd person not present in the conversation. And when the MC woke from his nightmare and was thinking of his dead sworn brother, the pronoun she was used instead of he.